All Comments on 'The Book of Carnal Ch. 05a'

I can definitely see IntrepidFate has inspired your work. Not at all a bad thing. Continue your awesome writing.

Hey so this is a pretty awesome story. I mean sure you could use an editor, but it has a really interesting plot. Are you going to finish the story? Plz don't just leave it just as it was starting to get good. That seems to happen with depressing frequency on this site. A really good story like this starts out really promising.... and then the writer vanishes.

I would really love to read more. Please continue!!!

Yet another great story left unfinnished :(

This was a nice story, wanted to keep reading.

Thanks and please keep writing.