All Comments on 'The Bookstore'

by HotStoryWriter

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Very Nice

Now thats great customer service you don't find in the reatil world, very hot had me shooting all over my hand, as I am Rick and was the Rick in your story in my mind.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
very hot!

I hope more adventures are to follow!

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
wow

to be able to suck your first cock and have him cum in your mouth wow

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
changing attitude

i am happily bi. for many years i was apparently good in bed with women. i never had one refuse a second trip to bed unless it was a one night stand that i never saw again. afterr several aborted efforts, stopping when the burst of pain came, about a year ago, i wasfinally able to be thoroughly fucked. it took me a while, but now i fel i am a good fuck...i moan and twist, working his cock with my man pussy. often in a video booth, i will back him into a wall and furiously pound myself on his wonderful hrrd, hot cock. i think i can please anybody now.

justagirlathartjustagirlathartover 18 years ago
Hot Story Writer Indeed

Your first time with a guy really was a pleasure to read, and for a new author it was amazingly well written.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Great first story

The sequel has to have Rick doing some fucking not just getting a blow job. Great story and easy to picture the scene

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Good story

Thank you for giving Rick the hairy chest and pubes! Too many of these stories make the men seem to be completely hairless! And chest hair and pubic hair on a guy make him soooooo sexy!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago

Your author name is very accurate. Super hot story

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

That was amazing, I want to visit Matt myself and fuck his brains out.

Gypsy59Gypsy59almost 3 years ago

An excellent read! I stayed hard from the time Matt went to the bathroom until the their mutual blowjobs and beyond. I think your story setting really set the mood for an explosive story. I do hope you write a sequel

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