All Comments on 'The Boys in Blue Ch. 01'
by RobinLane
- 4 Comments
Anonymousabout 9 years ago"Robert took up poison three hundred feet above him and loitered" Loitered? Oh yes, he was waiting for the poison to work.
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Anonymousabout 9 years agoThe Harrier is/was quite capable of hovering and even flying backwards. Gave the Argentinians quite a shock in the Falklands campaign!
Anonymousover 5 years agoReally excellent standard of writing here, way above and beyond what I usually come across on literotica! Absolutely no romance or hooking up going on in this chapter, yet I don't even care! It's that good. I'm invested in your story dude
Anonymousover 4 years agosorry to be ignorant, but can anyone explain Wadi to me? I've Google searched and found nothing. It's mentioned in several of his stories and it's driving me crazy trying to picture it in my mind. RL help?
