All Comments on 'The Brand Ch. 04'

and i never read stories with a domee or women with women. But this one has drawn me in, i now look for each new chapter. . .patiently waiting.

The flashbacks are a welcome addition. The change in format was a little disjointing.

The storytelling is superb. I like these women. I love this love story. And the sex is realistic, if not my cup of tea.

Please do work on your use of commas in dialogue.

Outstanding story. One of the best here in sometime. Thank you.