All Comments on 'The Bride's Education'

by leospaceman

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ErotonautErotonautalmost 13 years ago
A good start

But rather too brief. And just how far is Lily prepared to let this go? Eric is expecting to wed a virgin, after all.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
I hope

You keep the story consistent and hot. Lilly must still be a virgin, but she can learn to do other things. But her fiance also needs to learn some tricks, and so the three of them should invite him to watch and touch as well. Great start!

HeadguyHeadguyalmost 13 years ago
Pretty improbable...

...but really hot! A great plot idea and I hope you plan a whole series of "lessons."

EOLoverEOLoveralmost 13 years ago
Yummy!

I want some more!

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