by SubmissiveRomantic
Thoroughly enjoyed the buildup.
Good suspense and marbelous training.
Look forwrd to more stories.
Very well done. I loved the story and the pace. Would to read more stories like this.
Enjoyed your submission. Once I started reading it, could not stop until the end. Please write more along this line.
a nice story with a diffferent angle...I liked it. Thanks to the author.
Not your usual run of mill boy meets girl, boy gets girl story. What was nice is didn't really see were things were headed until almost the very end.
You've a gifted sense of story telling. Very well done!
Correctly, your ending. I loved the way you told the story and you 'developed' the characters. You got my vote. Two Thumbs, way UP.
I sorta guessed the ending, but really loved the way you developed it. thank you for a wonderful, lovely story. I have really enjoyed all of your work.
I've been reading and contributing to this site since 2001. Yours is the first story that I skipped through the sexy parts to read what happens to the characters. Held my interest to the end.
I enjoyed the whole story! Hope there are many more to come!
a really good read,
i enjoyed the progressive pace of the character interaction. the story itself is one of wat if, , ,
thankyou. one of my favourites
EXCELLENT🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟
Congratulations on one of the best stories on this or any other erotic literature website I have found, your characters and scenarios have been built with care and considerable forethought. Your use of the English language has been a real pleasure to read. You cloaked the finale extremely well.
Thank you for publishing this work here and allowing us, the readers, access to this story.