All Comments on 'The Bug That Got Me Mom Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Why?

Why do author's have to include the whole family in stories? It makes it all lack a sense of realism and seem to be a swapping swingers nightmare. If you would stick to one protagonist the story would be readable and enjoyable. Don't put all your ideas in one story, use them on another story instead. Chapter one was good, but the angle of steff and greg ruined it all here. You could instead have focused on billy and his mom, maybe included steff there. One star, and won't be following this any more...

rodavrodavover 12 years ago
This is good

This story is good and exciting. There should be a part 2 and 3. Great story. Please add some naughty things like sniffing musky panties.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
great story

this the best story a read

pleasse go on whit billy and mom let she beg to be fuck

RyeandGingerAyleRyeandGingerAyleover 12 years ago
Good followup!

All four family members have gotten a taste of sexual paradise, but some still think there are secrets - what will happen next?

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichover 12 years ago
So far, very hot and erotic

I hope that he gets his mom's pussy soon. Once his mom gets his giant cock in her pussy, she won't want any other man to touch her.

Thanks for the read. .

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

So far so good this Chapter still holds my interest and gets me hard. I like the reluctance part especially with the mom it makes it more exciting and satisfying when have to work to reach that awesome goal. Keep the Chapters coming (could try make them slightly longer though).

homerjayhomerjayover 12 years ago
loved it

i like where this is going. whole family?

bigdaddyg123bigdaddyg123about 11 years ago
The Bug That Got Me Mom Ch. 02

Billy has become so evil one can see the little red, curved horns sprout up on either side of his head about three inches above his ears. What amount of evil lurks in his dirty little mind?

Daddy Greg certainly knows his goose might just about be cooked. However, he doesn't yet know that his daughter Stephanie is aware of the tryst between her mother Dawn and Dawn's and Greg's son Billy. There seems to be some sort of elaborate web being spun in their minivan as it tools down the highway to their week-long getaway! The only family member not yet knowing that all four of the family is involved is the last person of the family trying, morally and consciously, from happening, is the person driving, Greg's wife and their kids mother, Dawn!!

As life sometimes throws unexpected events into the throes panic of a family, the mother, Dawn, will probably be the most sexually driven, the most erotic and wanton, once she finds out the goings on, probably from her now-evil minded son, Billy.

The story still moves along with the pace of incestual activity on the ascendency, three members of the family in the know and most of six days left for those events to play out. Buckle up!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
family fuckers doing what comes naturally

Society condemns it but can't do anything to stop it. Big brothers fuck their kid sisters, fathers fuck their darling baby girls, and sons fuck their own mothers. It happens all the time, all over the country. In this installment of bob's great series, Steff gets hot seeing the big bulge in father Greg's pants and is real anxious to get her daddy's fat meaty prick for herself. She breaks down his barriers--it doesn't take much--and soon dad's mauling his baby girl's adorable little coochie and Steff's handling his big veiny daddy-dick and his heavy loaded daddy-balls. Greg feasts on his darling girl's cute little twat and she takes as much of her father's fat cock in her mouth as she can fit. Billy and his mother are in the back seat, deep kissing and handling what each one has between their legs like it belongs to them. Truth is, it does. A mother's warm wet cunt belongs to her boy, just like a boy's big hard cock belongs to his mom. Look, that cunt is the boy's own damn birth canal, so who could possibly have as much of a right to shove his cock up inside it as her own son? And the mother gave birth to the boy, his whole body came out of her body, so who has as much of a right to the boy's young cock and all the sperm in his young balls as his own mother? That's what family is all about, people. Get used to it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
A Great 2nd Chapter...

to what is beginning to be a Great Fantasy tale, I really enjoyed how Steffi "took things into her own hands" after spying her brother and mother bringing each other off in the back seat of their Van. And managing to manipulate her father into bringing her off with a "69" that allowed her to simultaneously download his cock into her waiting mouth was a touch of Magic! More, More Please! And Thanx Again for the read.

LonesomesoulLonesomesoulalmost 7 years ago
Soo good!

Hurrying to next chapter - can't wait to read more!

Foxterot7aFoxterot7a9 months ago

Very good story; however, I do not like the thought of blackmail. To-date, the sex has been mutually consensual, to wit: the respective participants willingly participated. Implied threat or actual use of positional powerplay and/or emotional or physical abandonment ceases to make mutually consensual incestuous love and/or sex possible. 5 star story, so far.

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