All Comments on 'The Bullpen Ch. 07'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
not your average story

I thought the whole concecpt was ingenius.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Fantastic series

I really love this series. A really interesting plot with great attention to the emotions and conflicts in her personality. Your work is the best!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Is there more?

Is this the last of the story? I wish you would write more chapters to this. Great story. It's my favorite.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Amazing

Your set of stories is about the best I've seen; and I've been doing this - writing and reading - for a long, long time.

Well done, sir.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
The best story so far

Not just from this writer, but from the few hundred (that I read) of the top lists of this entire site. If I knew his name I'd go buy a book from this writer. It's the realism of peoples reactions that works so well. And intelligent characters. Story and plot are brilliant. His other stories are also good, but this one is the best. I wish there was more from him.

ericthebardericthebardalmost 11 years ago
Incredible.

In. Fucking. Credible.

This story kept me rapt for its entirety, the only irritation being having to click the next segment. This is fantastic work. I frankly don't know how much more I can say about it without simply gushing off fatuously, but be assured in my sincerity when I say:

Well done. Well done indeed. I will definitely be checking out the rest of your work.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
So amazing

I loved this. You had me hooked for a full three days, reading it every chance I got.

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