- Romance
- The Bus Journey
- Page 3
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Click hereI have just told Sam that I love her more than ever and I'm so happy she's my wife: She is crying softly in my arms.
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- COMMENTS
2ndFiddleover 3 years agoThat was a well done story with good spacing and good timing. Well done and it was a pleasure to read.
Anonymousabout 9 years agoEnjoyable story understand the reason for four stars not five is it explained her reason for the bus ride but not his motivation thoroughly. The story felt incomplete.
tbear69about 9 years agoI don't often read the romance category, but I am glad I read this one.
shaman43about 9 years agoEnjoyed your tale. Wonder at your reasoning for using the first person view and then changing that view. Seems an unnecessary complication for the reader that lends nothing to the story. Would recommend third person if the thoughts and feelings of both characters are wanted.
