All Comments on 'The Business Trip'

I really loved this Dark and twisted stories I would Love to be taken like that

Nice to see a strong woman take charge...like it or not!

We both agree that Jill is one sick twisted bitch. To satisfy her, she is going to ruin a perfectly good marriage. He should call Patricia immediately and tell her what has happened as well as his bosses and the police to take him to the hospital for rape and have his blood analyzed for the drug Jill put in it. If they do not do anything about Jill, then he should file a sexual harrasment suit against Jill and the company. The last thing he shold do, is hire someone to get the tape back and put her out of her misery before she has time to edit the tape. Laura & Lisa, the bi sisters, NO VOTE FOR TRASH

I thought it rocked. Having the woman in charge was a great twist. As for the trash sisters, they need to shut the hell up and quit spewing all their anger and frustration on anyone else.

Go for it NP, you are awesome

This is some of the best stuff of your I've read. The wording is careful, designed to bring the mood of it out. And the mood is just that spectacular. It brings you up and down with the story.

You know whats funny? The incest sisters there, being anonymus. They don't want you to know if they write stuff, cause they're afraid of your horde of follows attacking their writing for what it more then likely is. TRASH. Just like them.

Your better then they are plain and simple.

Great story and got plot. I just wish I had a co-worker like her would make work so much easier..well not initially but later on...well

Trmendous on all levels! Would love for her to betray him and then take Patricia, permanently, as her lover.

Priscilla