All Comments on 'The Cabin'

I thought this was one of the best stories I have ever read on this site. I liked the slow build up to a frantic passionate ending.

This story had me thinking about my first real crush. Damn I'd still love to make love to Alma. I guess you don't ever get over that first crush.

Keep up the good work.

Please coninue this story.

Good story, but it seemed to end rather abruptly.

Boyd

I've read several of your stories and really enjoyed them. You are very talented. It looks like you only wrote in 2008 ... sigh .... sure wish you were still authoring. [Gualterio]

you wrote a beautiful love story. the ending was a bit unrealistic however. perhaps they should have agreed to date when they went back to the real world before jumping over the broom.

Sorry I came so late to this wonderful story.