All Comments on 'The Cabin'

Flick Her creates such amazing fantasies. I was instantly aroused before I was even done the first paragraph. The words she uses form an enticing image in the mind creating a wonderful experience as I read. The Cabin excites and arouses me more than watching my favourite porn star in action.

Personally I find stories that are written in second person are usually subpar. This one is no exception. Do us all a favor and write the bulk of your story in first or third person, then if you must you can throw in a little second. Stories in second person feel impersonal and categorically lack depth.

Good one.