All Comments on 'The Camping Trip'

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Regan24Regan24over 18 years ago
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good but not great. I love all of your other stories but this one seems to be lacking something....

*Regan

1blueyedgirl1blueyedgirlalmost 18 years ago
Hot and sexy as always

You never cease to amaze me with your writing. My body reacts to every one of your stories. Where's the latest?

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

This was very hot, daddy...

Bubblebutt0518Bubblebutt0518about 12 years ago
not the greatest

develop real characters instead of using all the "i's" and "me's". it would make the story more interesting

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