All Comments on 'The Cardboard Guy'

Very Very Sweet.............

this story was just so wonderfully great, im kinda wishing you would to a sequel to it. hope to read more from you soon

This is a very sweet and tender story. Please continue it!

Could I have some more please...

I loved how you showed the insecurity and want on both sides. When your characters finally came together, the passion felt so real.

"So much, to have the bed full." It is such a simple desire, yet so familiar to many, and so honest, too.

Beautifully done.

PLEASE continue this!

I'm in awe at the quality you get here sometimes - FOR FREE! This is one of the stories that imho doesn't need a sequel. Great character development (we know they have a past but it doesn't need to be spelt out in detail) and seriously complex emotions described in simple words ("so much to feel her skin against his, so much to..."). You're a genius - thanks for making my day!

Sweet, beautiful story. Is there a second chapter?