All Comments on 'The Cause'

Please continue writing. And don't forget the sex-crazed antics when the females break protocol, or have it broken for them xD

This was a great start. You have captured my attention please continue, waiting on the next chapter.

excellent start. hope to see more. Thanx.

I am really looking forward to more, please go on!

more please. I am being greedy but longer chapters too. yes, I ask for the moon. lovely story and I can't wait to read more. 5 stars

Good start!

It's hard sometimes to find stories that really capture your interest. So many seem like a re-hash. Your story, on the other hand is fresh and new. I can't wait to see where you go with it. Keep up the good work.

You have me hook, line, and sinker!!! I can't wait to read more, don't keep us waiting long. Five big ass stars!!!

So many directions this could go in - I can't wait to see how the story acutally unfolds!

It's been several weeks since your initial submission. Please don't keep us waiting too much longer for your next chapter.

I hope that the next story will be longer because its taking so long for you to post a new one.

I love this. I really wish you would have continued with it. Such a great storyline.