All Comments on 'The Challenge Ch. 01'

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bornagainbornagainover 17 years ago
the other man

Its pretty good spank but if iwas the husband i would be a little weiry about the meeting because hse already met the guy and had aan affair with the guy but never told the husband if they met online why doesnt the wife tell the husband she already knew the guy already.

Pat

Atlanta,ga

DontThankJustSpankDontThankJustSpankover 17 years agoAuthor
That's the point of the story

The husband not knowing that his wife and the other man have already met is the point of the story. It's a fantasy, not meant to be realistic. The husband thinks that he is just this anonymous man that they have met, and that's part of what makes it so exciting for this other man. He already knows this woman intimately, and now he's getting to have her in front of her husband.

I hope this helps you understand my intention of the story better. Thanks for commenting and the constructive criticism, I welcome all feedback.

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