All Comments on 'The Changed Ch. 01'

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Hethen129 over 10 years ago

interested

Good beginning but that did not feel like a logical stopping point for your first chapter. I am excited to see where this goes though

Pallaton over 10 years agoAuthor

To Hethen129

I see your point! When I had submitted the story I thought that there was more there!! I'm sorry for that.

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