All Comments on 'The Chess Piece Ch. 11'

Bring her back!!! *stomping my foot* CPR. Something. Anything. Please.

Grrrr I hate waiting for the next chapter!!! LOL.

You are a great story teller and excellent writer.

I just love this story. I will check nightly for the next chapter.

Cinder you wrote another great chapter in this series. I like how Jason was able to fake his own death and comeback to Laysea and his son. I was sorry to see Trista get killed by Tiffany but I was happy to see Tiffany be killed by Maxie. Can hardly wait to see the next chapter in this series.

I'm loving this story, but as others have mentioned in early chapters, please find a new editor, doesn't seem like he does anything to them, yet you seem to think he is so great.

Jason’s tongue lashed her nipple with his tongue. His tongue has a tongue?