All Comments on 'The Choosing Ch. 05'

So glad to see the update! I love this story! Excellent work. The commas did not die in vain.

So I shied away from commenting on this story before, but I feel it just now started to really take off, with "her" taking control, doing magic and all. Although mention of all the coven women prob'ly helped with that. uh. Nicely woven chapter. Anyway i'll take PacoFear's advice and strap in for more `epic'.

very intriguing story!! Love her growth and control - you wrote her wistfulness and pain over the son very well. I hope you continue soon!

I've found your story by chance and it's wonderful.... I just can't wait for the next chapter! Please keep updating!!!

i'd never read erotic literature before your story the choosing. so far im really enjoying it. i was expecting something vulgar or over the stop. but this is excellent. im finding it the perfect balance of story and erotica. if you printed this as a book i would buy it.

i can't stop reading!