All Comments on 'The Choosing Ch. 08'

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GrumpyGambyGrumpyGambyalmost 14 years ago
What a great story!

Wasn't I lucky to be reading chapters 6 and 7 when midnight struck and chapter 8 appeared?

Wonderful wonderful story. Characters, plot, pacing, dialogue, sex... DarcySweet, you got it all!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
redbodypaint

squeal!!!! so excited to see not one, or two, but three updates from you! it's like christmas, but in july, and i'm wondering if this smile will ever leave my face. thank you, my darling darcy, thank you.

canndcanndalmost 14 years ago

awesome. I really like where you went with this. It is still hard to know what to think of Roth. Good or bad? Compared to Malachard he may not be as bad. Now you show him seeming to like her for her strength and stuff. Nadar and her are clearly meant to be (I hope you have someone teach her more about the tether thing so we understand more) and yet it seems real hopeless. He certainly can't claim her with the dad around. How will you work this? Hope the next chapter is out soon!

alexatron1alexatron1over 13 years ago
wow

My skin's tingling with excitement!!! cant wait to get to the other chapters

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