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by Clea

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Good read

Was a nice story, but as for critisim .. watch for gramatical errors that distract. Also, "she" said that she had a summer dress on with nothing else .. then later has panties on ... other than that .. like I said good read

Cheers

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