All Comments on 'The Cline's Conquer Time Ch. 04'

Wow. Unbelievably hot. That sex toy thing is really a turn on

Awesome!!!!

May Jocelyn and Derek continue their love affair until she really gets knocked up by him.

You descibe this story vividly and sensually.

Jocelyn said to Derek as follows:

"And eventually, my son, when the time comes, these tits will be full of milk again, and you will fucking be in charge of drinking all the milk away on a daily basis. These tits will bring you nothing but pleasure. So get used to this, baby. This is your future."

I wonder if his fantastic future will turn into reality on chapter 5. I hope such consequence as she predicted.

"The scent of her wet cunt hit Derek's ears and made him dizzy" ???

But the whole, I have other man around the world, thing felt a bit weird. Did she choose him over everyone else, or not ?

stopped after boring first page of talk, talk, talk. i see why you are called the talk man. skip to the story and skip the extraneous bullcrap

@anon from 5/17/15 - Well he is called the TALKman.

Seems another fine story series from a proven and prolific author .. Thanks, TalkMan!

Regarding a complaint about verbosity, I'd suggest that it's the author's prerogative, and the exchanges add interest, while helping to flesh out the story. The dialogue further explains the narrative and appeals to readers' cerebral sides, for those who have such.