All Comments on 'The Closer'

by drlust

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

A brilliant story.

Ravey19Ravey19about 3 years ago

Surprised only 2 comments. Great short story. No romance but then not in that category.

amsterdamamsterdamover 11 years ago
You f***ing did it!

You made me hard and you made me smile. Great short story. Good build up, excellent characterisation and a satisfying climax. Bravo!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
i even loved the fart :)

fantastic! got me a bit excited, might play with my vibrator for a lil bit ;-)

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