All Comments on 'The Coffee Shop Girl'

Please continue to write about these 2 lovers. Please leave out any BDSM.

But no, DON'T leave out any BDSM. You managed in the Gretchen story to get around the cliches and put some levity and fun into the genre...(not that I have an inherent problem with the genre! I find myself perusing it often.) Besides, Bethanie and Maddie already are into the heart of it: power, teasing and control games....all very hot. I can't wait to read the shenanagans your girls (and guys) get into as the series develops.

This sounds weird , but I sense the male hiding behind Bethanie's character. A dominant male, even though you write a sexy feminine physical description of her. Maybe your anima? That is certainly not a negative criticism. As a straight identified woman who loves strong men, and has had some bi adventures, I find her overlapping and shifting male/female layers of sexuality very compelling.

And yes, coffee is a wonderful aphrodisiac. Smelling freshly roasted coffee is downright arousing.

Keep me posted! Write fast and dirty, or slow and teasing...but write! I will try to be pickier for you but your work is above a lot of fray here.

Wow... I've left Anonymous reviews/comments for each of your Bethy/Maddy fics and I must say I adore this couple to death. You write sex and sexuality that is blisteringly arousing and never crude or base, regardless of the topic (and I'm not a fan of BDSM, but I like what you write).

Your characters show an ease and reality in their interactions with each other; what chemistry! And your descriptions... You paint a truly LOVELY picture! And funny, lord is it funny!

It's a joy to read. And read again.

I especially like that you pay attention to the rising action just as much as the climax (literally). For me, the joy in really great fiction/erotica is the buildup, combine that with such wonderful, vibrant and defined characters and you've got the makings of genius.

I do hope you write more tales of adventure and love with these two lovely ladies, as I, for one, greatly enjoy reading them.

And as a blonde who loves brunettes, I ADORE Bethy ;3 And yes, I have walked down the street and ogled women/girls I "want to do."

I love that bethany dwelled on what she thought of her sexuality and feelings regarding maddy. I was scared that it was just a superficial relationship for her at first.