All Comments on 'The College Club Ch. 01'

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AverygoodlayAverygoodlayalmost 12 years ago
Good start

Good start to what may turn out to be a great story.

Glad you didn't include a monster cock, get so tired of reading that BS.

The sex was nice, but went a little fast, cold have had the make out longer and since she's teaching him he needs to learn to eat pussy

nighthawk22204nighthawk2220411 months ago

Great start, hope you'll take some time to write and send us a few more chapters. This storyline could certainly be expanded along several threads, like hookups with Satori, learning to enjoy the fetishes of Asian girls, dating Carla who might be willing to teach John how to enjoy anal fetishing, and getting to meet many of the other women in the club, or of finding a strange new virgin teacher and introducing her to the club as well as breaking her in. It sounds like you originally had some thoughts about multiple chapters, so I hope you'll share them with all your fans here.

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