All Comments on 'The College Roommates'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
I liked it!

I'd rather hear about a loving wife sharing her friend with love than hearing about a man sharing his wife and she is humiliating him.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
A good read

Don't take the negative to heart .Learn from any mistakes but do write again .

The story was enjoyable and I am quite hard after reading it

OOAAOOAAover 10 years ago
EXCELLENT STORY!!!!

CONGRATULATIONS!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Overall I liked it

But it did have several errors that detracted, such as grown for groan, missing up names (who is Debbie?) and changing tenses within paragraphs.

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