by Rhywman
I'd rather hear about a loving wife sharing her friend with love than hearing about a man sharing his wife and she is humiliating him.
Don't take the negative to heart .Learn from any mistakes but do write again .
The story was enjoyable and I am quite hard after reading it
But it did have several errors that detracted, such as grown for groan, missing up names (who is Debbie?) and changing tenses within paragraphs.