by Steven_Ross
A loving family having sex --- what more could one ask? It is listed as being incest, so that was what I expected and you did not disappoint me. I enjoyed it. Please write more.
Slow things down ,otherwise no real problems.This could have been a long erotic series,but I have no idea where you are going from here.
Your grammar and text is beyond criticism,now lets get it used properly.TRY ANOTHER INCEST STORY ,and take it easy.
I agree with the suggestion that you start another good incest tale, preferably a sibling, incestuous romance. You certainly have a really good command of the Queen's English.
My only possible criticism is how you rushed Lisa into the situation. I have known several women that had sex with their brothers, they said they had to be slowly persuaded. And to relish the spanking so soon...?
Overall, I enjoyed the story, it contained two of my favorite incest themes, mother/son and brother/sister. Father/daughter is interesting sometimes but BDSM leaves me cold. I guess that I am not as big a pervert as I thought.
is the easy, casual dirty banter among mother and son, father and daughter, and brother and sister. This the author shows admirably in this excellent story. Once a boy's stuck his big hard cock up the same cunt he came out of, and a dad's slipped his fat veiny daddy-dick up his little princess's sweet little slit, and a brother's blown his brotherly balls up his sis's cute little cunt then the dirty joking around has free rein.
I think the father/daughter sex could have been left out since I have a daughter and the f/d sex is not my favorite incest story. But many like it so I can just skip those stories. Keep up the good work.