All Comments on 'The Commuter Train'

My God what a delicious story .. please let us have more of this tale.

Thank You..

what a great story! totally captivated, and i prefer the dominant Dottie!! Take care hun xxx

That was worth every second it took to read. It's got everything. I loved it. Please write more about Deni.

Your use hyperactive use of quotations drove me nuts and frequently took me out of the moment. Other than that it was well written, albeit slightly far from realistic.

Interesting story but you failed miserably in the "Disney" references. LOL.

Bambi was neither a doe nor a Reindeer.

You lost my interest when you got into the dominant game. No need to put physical pain into a relationship