All Comments on 'The Confession'

Thank you.

The story and you are both pathetic. I stopped reading half-way down page one.

You need your head examined. Wow That was ugly GoodyGoodyTwoShoes? I think not.

,pure dumb cuck shit that doesnt belong in LW put it in gay or fetish where it belongs

Fucking disgusting. Seducing a priest in the confessional??? This author has booked himself a one way ticket to HELL. Fuck him!!!

If you're so God fearing why are you on this site? Hmmm?

It's just a story after all, they're all just stories!

Hey everyone, relax. This is a fantaasy site, not the real world. And remember that you are logged onto an erotic story in the unfaithful wife catagory with a tag about a priest and hooker. This is taboo. That's what brought you here and if it isn't then you have no business on this site. If you don't like taboo then I would suggest that you stay away from catagories like this. Simple rule: if you dont' like something then don't read it or stop reading it. There is no need to get nasty with the writers. This is a well crafted story. If you don't like the topic, fine. But no need to get nasty. Great writing Miss Two Shoes, as always

Probably slide this into the Fetish category so people don't freak out.

Wow, this was so hot. As always, your level of detail is stunning. So erotic.

Greaaaat story!! The fantasy is soo real ....... yet still fantasy. Let's get real folks,, this is a fantasy site which allows us to post fantasy stories. Enjoy it for what it is and let your imaginations soar!

It's a fantasy story, of course. Accepting the actions, the reader doesn't know if the wife is really the nypho whore as she and her husband 'confess,' or if the two are just acting out a fantasy. Pretty fucking sick, but funny and erotic. I was laughing. Creative fantasy sequence. I didn't get the sense that this story was interested at all in creating 'real people.'

Miss Two Shoes, as always, writes in an egaging style, providing layer after layer of detail, and expressing the conflicting emotions and thoughts of her characters that make her stories more than the simple "fuck" stories that hold little interest. This story may push us into the forbidden, but it is well written and beautifully crafted.

The writing is great. Rate her writing skills everyone, not the content of the story. And there is no doubting that Goody Two Shoes is one of the best writers on this site.

but what the fuck do you have against the church. TK U MLJ LV NV

You really are kidding, right? This story is a joke, isn't it? This story should be in the humour or non erotic section of this site.

As a lifetime recovering Catholic I could smell the sandalwood and sex. Loved it. 5*

The mere fact that this writer can engage conversation both positive and negative gives testament to the quality of the authors work (why comment if it meant nothing, right?). I shall sit back and enjoy the petty onslaught of all of these so-called 'writers' and 'critics' who forget that they chose to read the story in the first place. Well done Mr/Mrs author.. I shall await in anticipation for the next one of your offerings!

This is a gifted writer. The artist uses words to paint a picture. Wow, great job.

the writer doesn't think fondly of the catholic chruch does he

is great, if you don't mind working your ass off to pay the millions of Catholics who live on welfare and at the expense of others with the blessing of the church which sweeps 1 Timothy 5:8 under the rug.

Amazingly well written, could be a genuine errotic novel

LMAO at the negative comments from the judgmental morons saying how wrong this story was. Really? It was so disgusting and wrong that you took the time to not only read the whole thing but i'm sure over half you even typed 'priest' into the search bar to get here. What's really your problem? Are you mad that the author(who is very talented btw) had the gal to write and post such a 'pathetic, sacrilegious story' or are you mad that despite your holier than thou sense of morality, you enjoyed it?

Here's some advice keep your ridiculous comments to yourself, if this isn't your thing simply don't read it or better yet, get the hell off of literotica because this site is swimming with fictional stories you might not approve of.

To the author great story! I thought it deliciously wicked and loved it from beginning to end. :)

This is my favorite kind of story, fucking a priest in the church. Using my body to drive him over the edge, feeling his cock explode inside me and spew its spermy semen up into my womb.

Great job!

... that people get holierthanthou and religious on a Literotica story. If you are a bible thumping, god fearing catholic, WTF are you doing reading this story in the first place?

Your writings were suggested to me this morning in Lit chat. I happened to pick this one from my 12 yrs. of Catholic School upbringing. Let me first say it is extremely well written and you are a very talented author. I look forward to reading more of your stories as time goes by. Not sure if these things happened in school but the girls always liked the gossip. Thanks again dawn

Very kinky....I loved it.

Interesting concept for a story-line, keep writing. Thumbs up!

Feel free to check out any of my stories + feedback.

Liked it very much...

VERY creative!

Will you think about writing some others around this woman?

I masturbated while reading the story.