All Comments on 'The Contrast Ch. 06'

You missed a lot of little words

The story is moving along well and I am enjoying the main characters, although this chapter was quite short.

As English is obviously not your native language, you should think about an editor.

As a general comment re the use of English in this forum, it's odd but a large number of authors have no idea that clothes (with an "e") are the garments you wear and cloths are for wiping and cleaning . Also people shudder not shutter as so many authors write.

Very nice story...I`d like to read some more actually :-)