All Comments on 'The Cookery Lesson'

Now write the next chapter :-)

Seriously, I liked how you showed what they were both thinking and didn't just describe the sex - though your description of the sex was nice and hot too

...and your use of language and images to describe the feelings of these two girls made this story enjoyable.

This is a "cooking " story. Nicely written and I really like the dual perspectives.

Can't wait for the next (two?) episodes. Please plough on.

BTW, it should have been parents' not parent's (if there were two of them).

you started story warm and ended up hot hot hot

I loved how they each had their own distinct voice. It was really a well crafted story, and I have moved it over to my favorites. This, and your short treatise on hosiery. Yum.

A very nice story indeed. I loved the double angle and I'm pleased to be wondering if any of this story is true. Do you like girls? Keep up the good work.