All Comments on 'The Council Ch. 11'
by JazCullen
- 114 Comments (Page 2)
Doctimeabout 12 years agoJaz, You are painting a masterpiece, only you are doing it with words, and not paint! I am retired, and do not need to stay up all night to read, but you are playing hell with my daylight hours. Your verbal word pictures are wonderful, and I believe it is safe to expect a happy ending, At least for the main characters. As I read this story, I read in the papers about "Shades of Grey". There is a market for writing like yours. Keep up the good work!
kinkykayekayealmost 12 years agoWith all the crap we are surrounded with everyday this is a sweet balm. I know they will have to fight tooth and claw for their love ( all of the couples) but it going to be so sweet in the end. I can only hold out hope for Annie and Caleb and baby for them as well. Lol this big girl is a sucker for happy endings
LynnMckalmost 12 years agoare another path to a deeper love. They certainly do not gaurentee deeper love if a struggling couple and they can't mend a rift heading for divorce. But! with a moderately happy couple the kids can put them both in heaven :)
Then come the grandchildren and they are even neater because we have learned so much thru our kids and we are able to love the grandchildren without worrying about discipline and "spoiling" them. Now I am on the verge of becoming a great-grandfather and I am sure it will be another great loving and learning experience.
If you can love kids can certainly kick it up a knotch if you just let them in and allow yourself to become vulnerable :) I find myself feeling closer to my daughters' kids than my sons kids. I watch my little girls becoming mothers; going thru the physical part of pregnancy. The changes are so huge that our sharing streches my heart too. Lynn
Anonymousover 11 years agoI read HoW first and it's annoying that I didn't read this all first. It's so good but it takes so long to get to where I started.
Anonymousover 11 years agoI shouted No Way with Andrei lol Awesome turn of events. The 63 days would freak me out though. I feel sad for Caleb wanting to be a Daddy too. Can't wait to start the next chapter!
Babygirlbrie8283almost 11 years agoI love the way that all the stories are going and keep up the work jaz because i dont knoe what it is but i love reading stories about vampies and werewolves and i am glad that my man told me about them because i cant stop reading them no matter how hard i try to put my phone down i just cant stop reading your stories
CC1984almost 10 years agoI knew she was going to pregnant as soon as the mating was complete!
fanfareover 9 years agoThere is an Old Doctor's joke. The medical term for a woman who does not use birth-control is 'Mother'!
Caramel_Satineover 9 years agoI've had a hard time liking Caleb up until this chapter. I'm rooting for him now. Andrei has officially replace Alexei as my favorite twin but Demetri will always be my favorite Vampire. I absolutely love this entire series!
LNJones34over 3 years agoA subtle hint of lilac. Sounds like Andrei is scenting a baby girl, or baby girls. However,,,,,,
A gestation period of 63 days would be for a wolf pup. Did Caleb forget to mention this fact to Andrei?
Should be interesting.
Anonymousabout 2 years agoJazz. I have read this story more than 4 times, I love it. Please complete it when you are ready. Can't wait for the last of the children to find there mates. Your awesome!! When you publish this I'll be your first customer.🤪😜
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