All Comments on 'The Council Ch. 11'

awwweeeeeeeeesommmmmmmmeeeeeeeeee chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i can't wait to see how this goes. excellent work hon...

Donna

This is absolutely the best twist in this story line. I am so addicted to this series! Keep up the good work!

We need the next one! I'm on pins n needles!

OMG - I LOVE THIS STORY!!! KEEP GOING JAZ

I am becoming your next groupie whether you like it or not, lol!!

Brilliant, brilliant brilliant, I am so glad I checked... I still can't quite believe you are making this up as you go along! Major kudos to you Jaz

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Just wow..I clapped at the end of this chapter, my god you can write. More is all I can say and 25 stars is deserved.

Lovedd ittt but can you please let alexai get cedar pregnant it would just make the story perect for me I absolutely adore the twins pretty pleaseeeeeeeee!!!

I am praying that you submit another chapter in the very near future and put us out of our misery. Please update soon :)

I usually see were a story is going, not this time.In the beginning you reminds us of Calebs love and devotion to Annie. That soft side of him that we all love. And then we find out about Calebs knowledge of the ware/vamp mating and his plan to deal w/ it. Never saw it coming!!!!. Now if Andrei would ve acted any differently towards Loretta, I would've been surprise. Amazing, Fantastic, Wonderful, Etc

Such a great chapter! I am absolutely loving this story!

You my friend amaze me every single chapter. I have checked for this one everyday since you posted on the 8th that you would be submitting it. I am blown away again! I was not expecting this turn of events and it pleased me a great deal more than it probably should:-) I am addicted to your story and one day hope to buy it in book form! I love it so much that I hope you keep writing it for years, taking us through generations of the characters and lives you have so deeply inbedded in my mind and heart. AMAZING

pregnant? Oh wow. This story is definately ur best yet. And im loving the new side to andrei...but what on earth will jared say?!

This was really good!!! I have to agree with an earlier comment - this is your best story to date that I have read here.

ADDICTED does not even cover it! I love this story. I know this is a series I will be rereading many times over. As others have already stated unpredictability is fantastic. There no such thing as a boring chapter. Please keep up the wonderful work. Thanks for sharing this story and your time.

When she threw up I knew...and my neighbors heard me scream!

MEJ, you are killing me here--I need for this meeting to take place and take place NOW! I need to read about Nors and Alexei's reaction to the fact that they can fully mate AND become fathers.

Imagine, in a little over 2 months Andrei and uncle Alexei will be changing crappy diapers--I AM SO LOVIN' IT!!

I don't need to tell you this was a great chapter but I feel I must--THIS WAS A DAMN GREAT CHAPTER!!!

I know I sound greedy but I'm sure other will back me up--PUHLEASE hurry with the next chapter!

kat

you've put him through the ringer the last couple chapters....

Excellent chapter this is getting exciting....

there was one whooopsie where you used Alexei's name instead of Andrei's....

I have reset the timer on my computer for Chapter 12 :)

Absolutely amazing ~ your complex characters and situations make me check every day for new chapters...You keep us so enthralled ~ can't wait for chapter 12!

Leave it to Caleb to fix things. And to think he knew all the long. Another story well done.

Are you typing? I can't wait for the next chapter.

Omg!!!! I can't wait until next week for the next chapter!!! That meeting will be amazing to read!

Love the twist in the story... i didn't think Andrei biting Loretta could be so complicated. Now he finds out that his venom will do no harm.I love how you impregnated Loretta, now she can have children and Andrei can learn to be a father. Wow I'll just have to wait until the next chapter to see what happens

-c-

You just keep getting better and better with this story. Now that you have done it you must start posting sooner. I need my fix.

Mike from Texas

This story gets better and better with every chapter.

Please don't keep us waiting too long for the next chapter.

Wow you certainly know how to get all your Jazettes up in a sweat girl...Loved the pregnancy twist and now cant wait for both the other were/vamp matings to fight over who gets hurt/who does not want to hurt meeting...you just know Cedar and Ashley will want to complete their matings...OMG how will Jared react to this...its just endless the twist and turns there are to this story.

Keep up the great work..cant wait for my next Jaz fix :)

I hope you know, you've just managed to set a standard for us to measure everything you ever write against.

Loved it she says as her speculation comes true! You were right when you sent me this.

I thought I'd be kind to you and give you some little hints for upcoming

chapters.

Chapter 10 - OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Chapter 11 - OMFG!!!!!!!!!!!!

Chapter 12 - NOOOOOOOO! OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!

Chapter 13 - [Can't speak - passed out in complete shock!!!]

Chapter 14 - OMG!!!!!!!!!!! YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

this is not a story, it's a masterpiece

Ahhhhhh! So Good. Heart in throat kind of happiness. Blood is pumping. Hands are shaking. Can hardly breathe I'm so excited. So excited can't put proper sentences together. Ahhhhhh! So Good.

Brilliant x 10 x 100 x 1000 x 10000 x 100000 x 1000000 x 10000000 x infinity!

Groupie - Z

So...who's going to host the shower? ;)

Oh I can't wait for the meeting! And everybody's reaction to the pregnancy! Cant wait for the next chapter..as always you deliver an amazing chapter :)

I seriously crave your stories. Keep them coming please. :)

Good job,thanks u post it.i loovvve all u'r charracter,especially caleb&annie.can't wait next chapter

Gee Whiz Jazz - I honestly never saw the pregnancy thing coming - wooohoooooo - you certainly keep us on our toes these days. One of your best chapters ever. Hugs, Kate

Well I did see it coming but not like this!! Loretta & Andrei having a baby....Awesome with a capital A!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Oh I hope none of the other couples do anything stupid like bite each other before the meeting.

Love this story so much. 

I knew by page one that Loretta's "eggo was preggo" l.o.l. The symptoms sounded too much like a human pregnancy times 10 to be anything other than pregnancy, and since she didn't initially die from the vampire venom it would have been a bit moot for death to suddenly creep up on her now in the guise of the stomach flu. Ya know I think this is the very first time that Andrei actually called Rhianna "Annie". His love and devotion to Loretta is completely adorable. And I know for sure now that they are having a girl... just wonderful another female for Andrei to fuss and make death threats over.

I like the way that Caleb is handling the whole situation but I don't think that Jared will be too enthused with Caleb leaving him in the dark about the knowledge Caleb possesses and the plans Caleb and Demetri have made. And poor Nors... I can already tell that Ashleigh is all but going to harass him day and night until he gives into him biting her. Sounds exciting... now don't forget about the name I picked out for Ashleigh and Nor's future child... Nash-a big red-headed vampire/wolf hybrid could very well grow into a name like Nash and of course Andrei's and Loretta's daughter's name has to be Rose. l.o.l Can't wait for the next chapter.

What a twist!! I loved this one, Andrei putting aside his machoness to ask for Caleb's help - and all for love Ahhhhhhh! Now all we need is more!! MORE!!!!

Love, love, love!!!!

I'm so loving this series, Jaz!!! I loooooove it! I'm doing a happy dance because Andrei smelled a scent of lilac~ Yay! Is Loretta preggo with a girl?? Take your time, but I'm waiting impatiently. lol

Zee~

awesome, i cannot wait until the next one

'OMG' totally covers it. HOLY CRAP. this is getting sooo ridiculously awesome :D

Loved this one too!!!! WOO HOO another amazing chapter what a great story and it just seems to get better.

This chapter had me screaming my kids thought something was wrong, I did NOT see Caleb knowing about inter-species coming and the pregnancy only when he was talking to Annie. Your writing is sooooooooooo good throwing in her feeling better as soon as she saw her mate was brilliant.

I am sitting on pins and needles for the next chapter.

Please HURRY!!!!

I love your stories....I was wondering how this was going to play out and I think that they way you tackled it is great! Thank you!

Ok you got me!!!!I did not see that one coming from any direction!!!!! Pregnant!!!???? Wow....just wow. There really are no words.....wow.....sorry!

well caleb is an ancient , so him knowing things does not surprise me, and i still see one hell of a fight coming, not to mention freya running afoul of one of the were's , hope to see more soon

Terrific, terrific, terrific. What an imagination! Hurry back and give us the next fantastic chapter! Thanks for sharing with us your wonderful gift.

*flails and runs in circles*

BABIES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! XD

amazing as always!!!!!

So unexpected! Gosh! You are incredible!! You leave me speechless,never saw it coming! You are amazing Jaz. I love your stories when I stumble across it. My heart keep galloping for next chapter. - Dyn

Another amazing chapter Jaz! I suppose by this stage it goes without saying that I - like so many others - am hooked and am ever so (im)patiently awaiting the next instalment!

I just finished glancing over the previous comments, and couldn't help but have a chuckle at the one:

*flails and runs in circles*

BABIES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! XD

I was thinking it would be more along the lines of Puppies!!!

But we'll take whatever you give us.

I've typed and deleted this message a few time, because this new chapter has made me "speechless." The way your mind weaves this story is truly a gift. If you ever decide to publish this series, please let me know, I'd buy it in a second.

Impatiently awaiting the next chapter,

Tdoublued

I love this story and the twist and turns have got me hooked.

Cannot wait for the next chapter to come out.

I enjoy all your work and I find that your my favorite author here. I look forward to your next chapter more than other authors no matter what story we are talking about. I have voiced some ideas that I thought would happen and finally I guessed most of it correctly. Hooorayyy. I really do love how the two very hard,evil brothers have so very much softened up because of love. Carry on and know we like what your doing.

Thank you.

Please don't make us wait too long for the next chapter. It's soo good!

whoa!!! this is a good chapter Jaz!!! i can't wait until the next chapter. :) are u keeping your fingers busy writing chapter 12? do you need extra hands? hahaha. this is such a revelation and a great chapter. ei, i will stop... and just wait for the next chapter.. do write fast ok? ...see i am not too demanding. hehehe. :)

Oh a vampire having kids awwwwww you have so got to get it so Caleb can have some with Annie that is so no fair.

Didn't see Caleb knowing more about stuff so going to be some very revealing stuff coming.

More hun pleaseeeee. I hate being left hanging lol

Take Care xxxxxxxxxxxxxx

Sol aka Jazz' Groupie xxxxxxxxxxxxx

Good god woman, do not stop now. What a HUGE cliffhanger. I am in awe of this chapter.

I can't believe how amazing this story is! Wait...yes I can! This chapter had me mad, damn near sobbing, and laughing my ass off. I can't wait for the next installment. I truly hope you're enjoying your vacay. Best wishes to you!

Fan-fucking-tastic. And that's all I have to say on that!

I can't wait to read more! Keep up the great work!

63 comments in like 24hours - that has to be a Literotica.com record surely :)

Jaz

So hope you're enjoying your holiday.

NOW STOP LAZING ABOUT and start posting daily chapters (hourly is fine too;-)). Such a gift you have for drawing the reader in. You yet again demonstrate your real talent & continue to craft a fine story. I want to know HOW we find you when you start publishing comercially because you really are so good at storytelling that to not do so will mean a lot of people miss out on a lot of pleasure - and we need whatever pleasure we can find in this crazy world. Keep up the great work.

Wow, I love it! I love your imagination. The whole interaction between Andrei and Caleb was interesting and exciting. I like the direction you took the details of the matings in. Can't wait to see what happens.

I agree with Loretta though...Andrei is starting to show his loving and whipped side to too many people :) He is ruining his charm as a hardass bad boy. Though it is certainly sweet to see how much he loves her. It really is exciting to see the pairs can have children. That would be the one thing that would be terribly hard for them to adjust to after finding out their mates were vamps.

I hope you will play out the ramifications of the Council being replaced fully since I know this is the last of the stories in this world.

Enjoy the rest of your vacation.

As always you amaze me with the story you tell. If no one has mentioned it, you should probably think about publishing your stories. Just make sure and keep copies here. :)

leave us hangin like that so unfair

I keep thinking there is going to be a point at which you coast for at least one chapter(that is very tongue in cheek) but not so!! Once more this chapter is surprising and amazing!

Thank you so much for this present from your vacation time!

I can't honestly add much that the others here have not already said. Amazing, incredible and thank you so much for not making us wait till your return!!!!!!!!!

This story keeps getting better and better!! I cannot wait for the next chapter.

Council is the best story so far! Andrei getting soft for his wolf! Ha ha ha.... I got the drift of the vampire & were mating and getting pregnant few chapters ago, but really love how you unfold the story.....

These series deserved to be published as books!

Jeez, Jaz!

Another great chapter. Now the problem is, since you're so good about responding to comments, you're going to spend all your time responding instead of writing chapter 12! So stop wasting your time reading this! :P

Whoa! One of the most awesome twists I've seen in quite some time. I was pleasantly surprised to see an early chapter. I hope the next one will still be out Thursday. I can't wait!!!

this is yet the best chapter in this series.. i cant wait to see more.. and to see hat happens with the council and all too.

Talk about big plans, I cannot wait see how it all turns out :) Ah I cannot wait till you are back so I can read more!

Wow, so many cool things going on in this story...I love it! I can't help but feel a bit sad for Caleb and Annie as they can't have kids and yet they'd make great parents (or can they, after all Caleb is a bit omnipotent now!!).

Am reeeaaalllly looking forward to the rest of the story, thanks!

If I think ch.10 was the best chapter I was wrong, ch. 11 is so mind blowing, surely I'm not dare to say it's the best chapter because I know you will give us more best chapter I will ever read, and I dare say you're the best author jaz!! YOU ROCK!! You should publish your story, coz it will put twilight in second place!

You pulled it off again, you wily fox!

Loved it - more grims on the way = more fun!

Sorry pushed for time but keep it XxX

This story is just riveting. Each chapter always tops the next. Can't wait for Loretta to find out she's in the family way Your writing is spectular, the way you delve into each character making me believe that I know them.

Love the development of the story. And the baby is going to be an awesome surprise for Loretta. Worried that Andrei wont come to his senses sometimes. Love the fact Caleb is all for the Council being destroyed.

Keep up the great writing :). You loyal reader.

Woo Hoo! Keep the chapters coming!

I absolutely love this series! I dedicated my day yesterday to read them all. Completely amazing! I've been waiting to find another awesome series like this.

I was totally lost of words........its amazingggggg, i mean i cant wait till next thursday, you are th BEST author ever Jazz. You did it again, keep the chapters coming.....

Ash.

Just when I thought I knew exactly what was going to happen... I expected the mating to happen how it did. I knew that Caleb had more information and that a full mating for the others was possible and (relatively) safe. I was pretty sure that it had to be Andrei and Loretta first because of the blood. I was almost positive that hybrids were possible and even probable... but somehow, I was still clueless when Loretta was feeling so sick. LOL! Can't wait to see how Caleb resolves everything, the other matings becoming complete and the civil war. I also am dying to know how Caleb knows all of this information.

Love it. Thanks for posting during your trip!

Nothing else need be said.

I think a few people here have mentioned how they stop to breathe when reading your stories. Hahaha. I guess I'm one of them too! I was so shocked that the gestation was instantaneous! But that's really good. This is a real good ending to the whole saga. =)

Amazing!! Andrei and Loretta are definetly my favorite couple!! And I can't believe that she's pregnant!!

-Ems

Sweet author, Bombshell be thy name! You know, I could actually hear dramatic staccato orchestral stabs in the background??!! Should develop a backing soundtrack... LOL Oh dear, loads of fun!

OMG wasnt expecting a pregnant Loretta at all!!!!

best chapter ever totall deserves a 5

as soon as Loretta fell ill i knew what was up..

Well done.

It seems like I say that every time, LOL.

JazCullen, you have been my greatest temptation for the past few weeks. I have things to do! I have priorities! I NEED sleep! Yet here I am, completely swept away in your world, until the wee hours of the morning...Sigh. You appeal to everything in me and more. It's not perfection, but it is glorious and captivating. Thank you :)

Great work! I do not care to sleep this is too good to wait until tomorrow to read. 10 of 10

I got as far as the first three sentences this morning threw my phone on the counter and had to wait hours before I could get back to it without any chance of interruption. Needless to say it was driving me nuts. I felt like a crackhead going through withdrawls all day. What's another sleepless night. Well worth the wait.

This is my first comment since I started to read your stories. I have loved every single one. I've cried and I've laughed and of all of your stories this is by far my favourite. Keep writing please, you are fabulous.

What can i say with every chapter you just keep surpassing the last one, it just keeps gettin better n better.

love the twins and how they have developed.

I cant wait to finish each capter but at the same time its drawing closer to the end and i'm thinking nooooooo! love reading your stories, you have real talent.

OMG...I'm so loving this chapter!!! I'm so embarrassed to say that I'm taking a sick day because of you :))) You have more control over my actions right now than I do. I've been up all night reading (it's now 3:45A), and there is no way I can make it through the day on 2 hours sleep, so I'm just gonna read instead. Do you provide doctor notes??? :))))))

and a new world order has to begun. TK U MLJ LV NV

I wanna cry finally they can have a true mating and they can start a family. I'm a sucker for the family and love stuff. Idk how or what to think with everything that's happened in this chapter. I almost feel how Andrei's feeling with his head spinning with thoughts. I'm so excited to read on. Oh ands I'm finding myself falling in love wit the twins lol. On to the next chapter