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All Comments on 'The Craziest Thing'

by Versipellem

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TheJourneymanTheJourneymanover 13 years ago
Wow-

very well written, awesome detail. Hope you keep writing, and not just erotica.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

Great first story. Hope you keep writing.

VersipellemVersipellemover 13 years agoAuthor
Thanks

Much appreciated- I'd never tried to write anything before, but was quite pleased with how it turned out. Maybe I'll start doing some more! :D

nomoretears00nomoretears00over 13 years ago
Oh yeah...

you should absolutely keep writing! This was very good.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Nice story

I agree with what the others have said. This is a good first story. You could probably squeeze this story a bit more by discussing what happened after that led them to becoming a couple rather then just f*ck buds or something.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Waiting for more.... Great story, first comment I've ever left.

Well???? When do we get more?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Great story

I forward to more of stories from you :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
well done

Wasn't expecting the adorable ending. Well played.

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