All Comments on 'The Cross'

I've submitted chapter 2!

Your writing is far above average. Great, believable stuff.

I definitely want to see the second submission with this cast. Your writing is wonderful well timed and great build up.

Great story, nice build up, can't wait for more. Not enough stories about big breasted mature women.

You are off to a great start, cannot wait for chapter 2.

I see this is your first submission on Lit. Congratulations on a finely crafted story. Good pacing, engaging characters, hot sex. :)

Hope to see more from you.