All Comments on 'The Dance'

by Moondrift

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seafairer4usaseafairer4usaabout 20 years ago
First Rate

Thank's for a great story! Hope you continue to submit stories

martiliasmartiliasabout 20 years ago
fantasy-reality

Excellent story, I enjoyed the development and the mingling of reality and fantasy.

Thanks for writing

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
Beautifully written

Realistic storyline. Well done :)

AmyfriendAmyfriendalmost 17 years ago
Excellent story...

and extremely well written with many sensual parts that broke down the taboo barrier...Well done, thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
mother is just a fuck slut skank whore

fucking your daughter or son is far more enjoyable - vice is nice but incest is best....go for it...you will never regret it....

raindr0psraindr0psover 2 years ago

I love how all your stories feel unique, but all so sensual. Would love more daddy & daughter stories from you.

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