All Comments on 'The Dance'

by DemoonKatjie

Sort by:
  • 3 Comments
perl10perl10over 16 years ago
Slice Of Life

Bravo. A real and raw slice of life.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
poetic awesomness

as you said in a blog, that you were frustrated with the rating that you got. i think that it's because there wasn't any sex, of masturbating ect. but a story doesn't have to be like that. when you understand the way that you felt, (and i have), it becomes a wonderful story. still miss you at the club...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
intense

oh my gosh. I love it. An intense little piece of work. I like the fact that there is more meaning to it then just about someone getting off.

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous
userDemoonKatjie@DemoonKatjie
I read, write, sing and draw. I believe that there is more to sexuality than just the blunt points of tab a inserting into tab b. The most erotic stories, and personal experiences happen and come to life when both the physical and the mental aspects are combined. i hope y...