All Comments on 'The Dance'

Thanks. Good erotic story. But what does your tag of "Myrtle Townsend." mean: a sequel perhaps?

Henry, this is an awesome story. It has a great plot, interesting and beautiful characters and a unique setting. I especially liked the cheekiness of the following line: "'Very nice,I say, looking you in the eye."

Thank you for posting this and I wish you luck on your future stories!

Usually I do not like stories told in the second person. However, this is the only one I have read where it worked. I enjoyed the build-up, main event, and ending. Her familiarity with the club and access to an employee only area led me to believe she worked there, but the ending and explanation were both surprising and plausible.

Please continue to write and share with us.

Present tense. Again, Damon Runyon made present tense work in his stories hardly anybody since has managed it.

You didn't.