All Comments on 'The Dance of Sex'

This story Sucked big time!!!

...when the completely illiterate try to write. This is stupid, badly written, and as erotic as a snakebite.

Dear author:

Please stop writing.

Sincerely,

The rest of the world

Had the potential for a good story, needed to expand the plot out rather that just cutting to the chase.

Will read one of your other stories for comparison.

Ladies or Gents, If you can dooo any better why not show us how it's dun ;-)

Not every bit of dialogue has to start with their name we get what their names are