All Comments on 'The Dare Ch. 01'

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kwalankwalan8 months ago

do not waste your time reading it, he did not finish the story and never uploaded the other chapters. Great story plot but very aggravatingly unfinished 12 years later

WoodencavWoodencav11 months ago

Great storey almost all the comments are to continue for 12 years, please don’t be a tease! ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Helen1899Helen1899almost 2 years ago

Nothing but a tease. So disappointed I was wet and wanting more.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Yes! Continue already!

Great start to a fun story.

i122i122about 4 years ago
Sounds like it is going to be a fun night

Just wondering what she has planned for hubby after she makes this guy cum?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
very nice

please continue, a fun road it can be!

gmann57gmann57about 6 years ago

Finish it but please dont make this a cuck fucking story, It has a good start

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
finish it

WOW nice story but, you need to finish it

Mnghm17Mnghm17about 7 years ago
Building up some erotic tension

Go for the second part. You have a plot and a sequence, and will be interesting to see where this goes

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Great build-up, hot story telling, but...

... you really can't spell. Their... Rigid...

knotz2uknotz2uabout 10 years ago
Hot story

Hopefully you follow up. What happens at the house & what will be her follow-up dare for him? You have a gift for writing, easy to read & erotic. Thanks for your effort....Pat (knotz2u@yahoo.com)

BTW I voted 5 stars

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
This is a HOT story, PLEASE continue

OMG, how disappointing to get to the end and have no second chapter. This is like Dallas leaving us hanging with "Who Shot JR". OK, many won't get that, but I am a 54 year old woman and found Literotica when my husband left it open one day. He doesn't know it, but since I found Literotica I can't keep my fingers out of my panties, I probably masturbate more than him now. Literotica has also made me more adverturous in bed.

This stroy, to be blunt, made my cunt wet. I seldom use the C word, except when I am REALLY horny and this story did it for me. It makes me want to go dancing, and for you younger readers, please don't be disgusted that a woman or my age still likes to fuck, now THAT word I love. I still have a pussy and have swallowed more of my husband's cum that most of you and my body, yes with a boob lift, is a tight as when I was 35.

Please write more. I am planning to leave this open for my husband to find. Maybe we WILL go dancing, with your help.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
cmon

You can't start up a good story and just LEAVE it like that. NEXT CHAPTER!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Ended before the finish

Good story but she needs the cock in her

nanuk61nanuk61over 13 years ago

please continue.....

theaquarianpentheaquarianpenover 13 years ago
PLEASE

CHAPTER2 IS NEEDED

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

Want more of this!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
More exhibition

It certainly grabbed me and, wouldn't you know, gave me a good start on a woody!

Please continue this story.

hardforithardforitover 13 years ago
More

Definitely keep it going!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
I am liking it so far

Keep it up, continue please. Oh, and no, I think this story belong in loving wife, not fetish.

steve7766steve7766over 13 years ago
please continue

loved it more please

Sidney43Sidney43over 13 years ago
Not bad so far

Needed some proof reading, but not bad so far. Please continue with another chapter and the category is fine.

gasmuse77gasmuse77over 13 years ago
Second that

Please continue...

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Great adventure

Please continue

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20 Apr 2024. Ch. 65 is nearing completion. Hopefully it will go to the editors by the end of next week. I want to put out at least one chapter per month. The new version of the Notes chapter (v 14), was finally posted. I do not know why it takes so long to post these Notes cha...