All Comments on 'The Darkest Knight Ch. 05'

You do characters extremely well! Must admit to being relieved the audience was excused thus allowing the prince and princess slave to begin to acquaint themselves to the other. Was enticed by the princess's comment alluding to more strength (not to mention pain tolerance) than previously revealed.

So, the battle of wills begins! Do hope you continue to have loads of time to write.

Is one supposed to laugh out loud when one's reading stories about grim punishment and unbearable pain?

Well I do

Splendidly written... when comes the motion picture? ;)