All Comments on 'The Darkroom Ch. 03'

I just absolutely love this story. It has been a real pleasure to read and will remember these two characters for a long time. The drunken ramblings were so sweet. Thank you for posting and I hope you will write many more stories in the future..

Oh jeez, you've got to figure out what to write, and quickly lol! There are some very good author's in this section, and very good stories here also, and this is up there with them.

I think that this is a lovely story.

Thank you for writing, this is the best story I have ever read in Lit. Hopefully, we will see some more of your stories soon. I wonder will you want to write a tale about folks in their 30's-40's? Not only college boys are having a great time, we (30 something's) also manage to have some fun, you know (LOL!!!)!

Love this story! The part about him snuggling the t-shirt was so sad and sweet. I look forward to your next story.

Oh, thank you so much! I absolutely love this story and was so happy to see an update. Please write more!

You have a way of making your characters quickly relatable, and that's not easy. And the sex is hot. Keep writing!

Loved this and can not wait till your next story comes out! It will be soon won't it?!!

This is the best story I've ever read in this site. Maybe not the hottest sex part, but definitely the best storyline. You succeed in bringing up my emotion with the characters. Jeremy, Bryan, Carson, and Stephan. You're a good writer and I hope you keep writing more like this. <3

Perfect ending! Loved this story! I cannot wait to read more from you!

Sweet story ( and more than a little sexy too ;p ) Can't wait to read more of your stuff in the future coz I totally loved this one =)

I enjoyed this story. Looking forward to reading more from you :)

Like tasting cream

I don't want this to be over.

I wanted to know what became of Carson and his plans for revenge and/or creating trouble for Bryan and Jeremy. I wanted to hear, er... read all the sordid details of Britton and Kelly; maybe a side tale of Lauren and Stephan. I want to know what really happened to Quinn way back when did I read into that correctly... THREESOME???!!!! OMG!

This was a sweet ending but somehow i feel short changed. BTW you did excellent for your first multi-chapter.

I hope all of my whining gives you ideas on what to write next.

Fantastic story! Loved Bryan and the moment of intercepting Jeremy drunk. Well done!

Carson is closeted gay (the one who screams louder - the guilty one! (the old saying)) and very envious person. I would like to see him falling even lower, then just loosing his job. I want to see him being punished for his hatred to people. No mercy for him! What a creature...

Your Story is the best! Thanks!

Now that would a *great* little story! Carson in University PR, faced with his own closeted self when he falls in love, as a senior, with a (drum roll, please) brand new freshman! Nice idea, anonymous... like that a lot!

Standing ovation for your writing skills.

All your characters stand out and captivate, loved them - even devilish Carson.

Speaking of whom, I'm with Anon and WickedWendy: Carson having to deal with falling for a young, new arrival would be delicious! Imagine the sexy fun to be had with such torture!

Whatever you choose to work on next will be awesome, I'm sure, so the closing sentiment is: write, write, write some more.

Five stars,

AH

I hope you'll write more. This was really well-written and it was a sweet story.

I read this wonderful story in one sitting today. Lucky me! Whatever you write next I know it will be outstanding. The interaction between Bryan and Jeremy was believable and touching. I will be on the look out for your next story.

amazing! i loved it so much. i wish it wasnt over. =]

Really loved this story. The character development was great and the immediate introduction to their intimacy was amazingly hot! Hope to read more from you soon. MCA xxx

Especially that last time where they reversed, something about it was just so real and touching. I really hope they're together forever :) what am i saying? They're characters! Not real! Well, there you go. Coulda fooled me :)

Just read all these chapters. I really liked this story line. Great job.

Not only does the story have real characters, the Story Has REAL Character.

I tend to fast forward to the end and read Comments. I hope you take pride knowing how many other quality writers, and named prolific readers, praise your works. I'm proud to add my grateful thanks for your contribution(s) for our reading pleasure.

I also checked your favs; another test of your "style" by knowing the authors and the content of their story themes. You've got talent, style, grace and appreciation for the good works of others.

Loved your story and all the r4ealistic interactions of the characters. You did really well! You know....this could be a great candidate for a sequel....HINT!!

I can't believe you managed to write such a powerful and beautiful stori on only what? Seven pages! People here practically write whole books to do that! (nothing against them but after having read 13 part stories, your 3 part one takes the cake. So sweet >.<

Excellently done.

I think I read this when you first released it. Am really glad to have found it again, its a brilliant story - would make a great tv drama :) I'll be looking out for your stories in the future!

Loved it :)

bloody good read well done........... x x x x x x x x

I loved this story. I think a continuation of The Darkroom would be great.

Maybe show what happens when Bryan takes over as editor and what Jeremy

does. Also would love 5 or 10 years later.

Great story! Good characters, believable and hot! Also agree with ANON, how about a "continuing adventures of Jeremy and Bryan!"

your stories make me feel inferior as a writer and a gay.

Loved this story and for your first attempt it was very well done but would love a follow up on Bryan and Jeremy.

I really adored this story. Wonderful.

Nut said

I was just wondering if there will be more chapters about Jeremy and Bryan soon? I just love their story and would love to read more it is so beautiful and funny that i was sad to see it end. Please post more chapters.

I love your stories so much, your are good, keep writing.

Love both those tales... But, where are the rest of your writings?

More please and soon!!! (It's been enough years waiting.)

Oh my god! That was amazing. Easily one of the best things I've read on here. Got the job done, many times! 😏

Great story, loved it!🥰🥰🥰Thank you!

I Loved this story, the prequel to the other story I know will be just as AMAZING!!! Thank You for writing these! Do you write elsewhere? I'd Love to know and read anything you write!