All Comments on 'The Date'

This is the first "5" rating that I have given in a very long time: and I read a lot of these stories in a weeks time.

I like it when a story makes ve as wet as this one did.

What matters is that she cheated and joked with her eleven year old daughter about it being a date. Justine could easily seduce her eleven year old now that she knows that women are good for sex. Naturally the dumb ass husband I don't have any sympathy for. He is so dumb ass and clueless that it would never enter his stupid brain or rather the soggy mass of gray he has in there. When a wife cheats it's usually some dumb ass husband that is the dupe...hahahahahahahahahhahahahahah

Sucking cunt will keep them out of trouble with other men. It should make her a better lover once she learns how to pleasure her girl friend. Her husband may want to watch his wife do her special thing

Sometimes the descriptors got in the way (e.g., you might look up the definition of "fulsome" before using it to describe a beautiful woman's lips). But the length and the story made up for that.

....it takes some people to realize their true sexuality.Must have been torture for the two girls all those years.Pistolpackinpete

I really enjoyed reading this story. I hope you will write another chapter to it as well as writing more stories like this one.

awesome story love to read more about these two lovers

Angela

that story was great, it really got me going. wow.

brilliant, more please

That was one of the most erotic things that I have ever read. Amazing.

Thank you thank you thank you....... I am what I have always considered to be a straight guy but my incredibly sensual bi-sexual girlfriend recently commented after an intense session that I must have been a lesbian in a previous life. After reading this masterpiece, I embrace that concept whole heartedly,...Cruzer

Good story line, however the juvenile pet names the author came up with, to nickname the vagina, was absolutely ridiculous.

...to read this story and to say how much I enjoyed it. Maybe there'll never be a follow-up to it, which I would love, but it's a great one-off all the same. Very juicy. Please keep doing what you're doing!

There was a continuity of plot problem when Rachel removed Justine's knickers. It said she put them in her handbag, but later it read as if Rachel had stuffed the panties inside her vagina and they fell out when Justine removed the thong. A bit distracting in an otherwise highly erotic tale.

The tired theme of the horny wife and gal pal. Not to mention the repetitive kiss with a fish aftertaste either to the salacious woman or cucked husband. Yawn.

A yummy story in every sense! I loved it!

Great story, one hot night. I don't think the wife/younger friend theme is tired at all, it happened to me a few years ago! It was very liberating sexually.

Shitty cheating story about shitty cheater.

Very good, well written story, most husbands would be happy for their wife to have a lesbian lover, wifey gets satisfied, hubby gets to fuck when she wants a real prick, pun intended, and no competing with another guy as to penis size, technique and stamina, all good, until they run off into the sunset together.