by KewlBlueTiger
I loved this story and hope you will write more to it. Just.. wow.... you took my breath away!
Your words flow so fluidly upon the page, i thank you for sharing this part of yoru mind with us, and i too hope so despratly to read on more of this wonderous tale you scribe.
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Your writing is beyond erotic. IT touches one in places where only feelings can go . . .beyond the physical. Write on . . .write on.
Without a doubt, your best work on Lit. We certainly need the continuation of this tale. You set the scene in this one perfectly.
Will there ever be a continuation of this story? It is an amazing story and has potential to become an epic. Write on!
This was an amazing story your descriptive usage of words are fantastic, it makes me feel as if I am really there. I have given this a 5 star rating and I wish there was a 6 star rating because that is what this story more than deserves. You have incredible skill as a writer. Please make a continuation of this story, I would really appreciate it!