All Comments on 'The Dawn of Wynter Ch. 05'

Is it going to be another year for an update?

I literally couldn't stop til I read all 5 chapters in one sitting. Hope to read more soon. This is one of the best stories to date that I have read on here.

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Sorry something i.s wrong .with .................my keyboard it randomly adds .'s and wouldn't stop. but no..............w it is?

... the overall storyline is fine I guess, except that your heroine appears to be quite childish...for someone, vampire nonetheless, who've lived more than 2000 years, and is yet unable to get on with her life, or to see the good her powers gave her, and then blindly and emotionally trashing her mate (after she's been shown it in her coma), goes to show you are trying to make her into an airhead.....or just trying to drag the story a little too long. No wonder it takes you such a long time to write each chapter because of the overkill in the reactions and detail....Yes, I do love your descriptions and flowery in your text and sentences, but after a while, the interactions between the hero and heroine and heroine and her friends tended to get far too long and tedious, so much that I would just scroll down to find the part that will continue the story onward....you are a good writer who does not know that you can be a great writer....

try not to torture your readers too too much..., still, thanks for your imaginative story..

hopefully one can get to see more chapters in a shorter timespan...@#@

Where are you? Looking forward to Zara teaching Iffert and Dymas a lesson. And picking up where she and Phillipe left off two weeks ago... Please tie up the loose ends...

At the prescipice of something amazing. You've drawn me into your world of wonder and intrigue. Please continue when you can.

When is the next chapter coming

Great story, definitely looking forward to reading more.