All Comments on 'The Day Custer Got His Ass Kicked'

by jacktar48

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FormerReaderFormerReaderalmost 10 years ago
Nice

I like to think they ended up together, even if its not likely.

jacktar48jacktar48almost 10 years agoAuthor
Me too, F.R.

I really didn't mean for this to be a sad story, but as you perceptively noted, it would probably not end well. That's why I quit when I did.

Thank you for reading, and for commenting.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
very nicely written

I really enjoyed this story: beautiful language, evocative of place, times and culture, a great build-up. This story can go a lot farther - the end did seem to cut it off too soon - the characters are complex and intriguing enough, and there is a lot of mystery about what makes them tick, how they got to this moment, and where they will go from here. It seems like story that is on the edge of bittersweet, between tragedy and comedy. I'd like to read more...

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