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Click hereIn the early dawn, Jason got up and looked at his mother, still lying on her stomach. The sight made his penis stiffened. He could not stop himself as he licked her anus, tasting the stale smell emitting from her. Her anus was tender and he inserted his penis inside her. The earlier ravishment had made her anus loose and it was easy for him to penetrate. Jenny shook her sleepy head and realized that her son was in her back again. This time he came fast, filling her with his hot balm.
The time had come to leave the cabin. Everything was packed in the car. They were silent, each with their own thoughts. Jenny was driving. Suddenly Jason turned to her and said, "I love you Jenny." He reached out to kiss her cheeks.
Jenny was taken by surprise on hearing him call her by name. As she turned to look at him, she did not see the truck cutting into her path.
Mother and son were buried side by side.
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This story had me. I enjoyed the emotional development of the characters. For the two characters to finally find true love, both emotionally and physically, was wonderful. I can not believe you killed them off, I was hoping for a continuation of this story, to include dating, marriage, children.
There I was thinking this story could have some good sequels and - you killed them. Certainly not expected. As others have pointed out - work on your tenses. Consistency makes it much more readable.
a writer with no guts.kill them off rather than tell a good story.either gutless or lazy.
I found the story quite interesting to read, and I can't make out why it has received the negative comments it has. It did rush a little at the start and the ending was a little on the permanent side but both these points are the prerogative of the author.
If those who've left negative comments are so bothered maybe they could consider writing an erotic story of their own, which I'm sure will be absolutely perfect.
Pete