All Comments on 'The Deadly Quicksand'

I have to admit that this is the first time I've ever run across this particular idea for a story. Nice job, humorous, and very imaginative.

Loved the last paragraph,yes we do shag on a regular basis,breaks up the boredom.

Yes, a little humor is appropriate here, nu?

not only do you touch the need for closeness between siblings but how to protect your selves and the environment. Way to go

This is the most imaginative story Ive ever read. Loved it!!!!

Great story but you told us in the begining the quicksand was deadly did you have to repeat 'Deadly Quicksand' so often?

Great story about tree-hugging incest.

Bravo, well done!

Great job, think I'll go find my sister and talk her into a walk in the woods. Very Funny.

Great story!

Really good little Earth Day submission.

I liked the light hearted approach you used in this story.

It was a good read.

thanks I enjoyed that

Well done!

I really enjoyed this, Great sense of humor, and good fun sex!

Well done!

I really enjoyed this, Great sense of humor, and good fun sex!

this story was great! eco-friendly incest hahaha

Obviously you have never experienced "quicksand".

I am not sure what was best, the humour or the incest but well done very much enjoyed this Tale.

Oh, my, God. Are you fucking serious? I was laughing so hard, it really was difficult to even write this comment!!!

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Hey, do you cum to this site to experience real life? HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!

'Deadly Quicksand' used too many times.

This story is totally stupid and asinine. It read like a twelve year old wrote it. Concept what do I mean there is no concept here? Sorry I wasted my time reading this.

I thoroughly enjoyed your asinine story. It was a funny and witty fantasy, good imagery and great use of slang, relating well to the emotions of the character, or lack thereof. One eyed mud eel? Great stuff.

One of the funniest stories I've encountered - a very deft touch.

GT

5* for funny! People make such a big thing out of so-called "incest", but all it is, is sex. Good to see the unserious side of it for a change.

You, ass, is seriously sick.

Usually the added comments and humor is annoying. This kept me involved in the visualization and was funny too. Well done. For those that have negative things to say...just get out of this topic. Great, erotic, sexy, funny read.

I am hard and horny wishing she was my sister.

Hope you have another chapter in you.

the carbon foot print crap aside...

Global warming crap aside. The little ice age about 1550 to 1750. Before that vineyards were in place in England. We haven't even come close to warming back up to that level. When the globe warms it spreads out the space of livable farm land. The real horror is another full blown ice age that squeezes the population to the equator. So maybe or not in a thousand or ten thousand years grapes may grow in England again.