All Comments on 'The Deal of My Life Ch. 01'

Ok you got me. I loved that twist. I'm guessing that hubby is in on the deal and is the real dom here. Can't wait to see how you play this out.

You have created a nigh-perfectly composed piece of erotica, full of believable characters, philosophy, tension and steamy hot sex. i beg you to continue the series and to put as much care and polish into further chapters as you have obviously put into this one.

Wow, this is seriously only... wow. It is wonderfull and I'm shure the folowing chapters will be too, it would be perfect even without a sequel - it is like a perfect oneshot that has such an shocking end (her boyfriend being biologically female, her having a husband, etc.) that I'm thinking about re-reading it, because it was so nice and to pick up potential hints to that withhin the story

I also like that she refers to jessica as being male, I am not shure about my gender actually (my sex is female) and I'm sure if I make up my mind to be male I would like to get called 'he' too, it is such a nice equality saying it that way

And just like in this story, I think thst every relationship is a deal - be it a parent, sibling, fiend, partner, teacher and so on and so on - and I broke up with a lot of friends because they couldn't stay to the deal being made and because when you have old friends the deal about what you want and what they get changes, I never thought that anyone else would see a relationship like that (maybe exept for BDSMler with contrakts)

So an overall georgeus story :)