All Comments on 'The Debutante Ball'

An ejoyable read. I liked this story a lot. Thank you.

This cant be over...well done

I think this is my favorite of your stories. No cruelty, just emotion. I thoroughly enjoyed it.

I was moved throughout the whole thing. Johnny's character at first seemed a bit 'blank' but the further I read into the story, the more I realised he wasn't and never was. His soul is wrapped up tight but you see it in small ways right from the start: perfectly done. I'd like to read more of these two, please. I want to feel moved again.

I agree with the comment before this. i think this was the best of your stories. I really liked the characters. Both Rique and Johnny went through such changes to become the best part of themselves. The only comment I'd make is that I would like to see you be careful not to write certain lines about using a tube to lubricate and comments about one's 'bottomhole' and about cumming in your panties in a way that it seems the same in each story. I can see those are turn ons for you and that's cool. Put it in your stories, but I find the parts with them are cookie cutter. Try to put it in differently. (pun intended)

Enjoyed the emotions of these two and their growth once they found each other.

all in all it's a great piece. my only complaint is that the ending when rique started telling johnny about his life and afterwards all felt rushed.

mmm... didn't like the ending... it was sooo good and then it just ended T____T

I have to agree with many others who commented on this story.

It was a great story...but then the ending felt so rushed. It was like you had a maximum word allotment and you finished the story in a fury.

You took time and set up a beautiful, sexy story, but then wrapped it up in like 2 paragraphs.

Hope you come back and add more, or write a different ending.

Loved the story. The ending was not there it needed more paragraphs and a conclusion if you don't write a sequel to the story.

I agree with some if the comments that the ending was rushed and I feel cheated because you didn't give Johnny a chance to rub chuckie's and bear's nose in it.:)